Thursday, 23 July 2015

सूरज की धूप

My first attempt in poetry writing. I would like to mention one of my blogger friend and highly skilled - Shweta Dave, who very recently written one of the masterpiece निशब्ध-प्यार in her blog. Though, I never ever thought of writing a poem, but that post from Shweta prompted me to write one of my own poem. Hope you will like this content piece. Since this is my first trial in poem writing, I will be looking forward to your reactions.



सूरज की धूप पौधों के लिए जीवन है!
वही धूप जो सर्दियों में वरदान है,
तो गर्मियों में तेज समान है!

वास्तव में ये धूप जीवों में ऊर्जा है!
जीवन का संचार है ये धूप,
प्रकृति का हमारे लिए अमूल्य उपहार है ये धूप!

सूरज की धूप में है दीप्ति विनय की,
ये एक संदेश है प्रकृति का,
जिसमें है शक्ति विजय की!

इस संदेश को यदि सच मायने में पहचानें हम,
हर रात की एक सुबह है,
हर अंधकार के बाद प्रकाश है,
बात असल में मानें हम,
तो जीवन सरल होगा,
गिरकर उठना और उठकर चलना ना इतना कठिन होगा!

अपने साथ संजोये कर्म पथ का निरंतर आयाम,
हे सूरज की धूप, स्वीकार करें मेरा प्रणाम!!

© विशाल ग्रोवर


37 comments:

  1. Very nice first Vishal ..with a ray of hope and reminding us to appreciate the gift of nature.

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    1. Thanks Somali for your feedback. I really appreciate it :)

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  2. Nice post Vishal !!

    Its indicate that everybody has ray of hope in the world..

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    1. Thanks Seema. I appreciate - you took time to read the poem and provided your feedback. Thanks a lot. :)

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  3. Bohot bohot sundar.....you have used beautiful words, its simple to understand and yet has a deeper message. superb first attempt Vishal. And now I am keen to read of such :) Keep writing!!

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    1. Thanks Shweta. I am very excited that you liked it. It was 'Nishabd Pyar' on your blog, which inspired me to write this poem.

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  4. Very beautifully expressed Vishal. :) Way to go! Keep blooming!

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    1. Thanks Maitreni for your feedback. Best wishes in advance from my end for your birthday. :)

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  5. Awesome, yaar...amazingly written. I feel the expressions came out well, partly because of it being in Hindi and rest was your magic!

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    1. Thanks buddy. I am really glad that you liked it. Your feedback means a lot.. it only inspires me to come up with better composition next time. :)

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    2. Welcome yaar. Will be waiting for the next one :)

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  6. Very beautifully written Mr. Vishal. The choice of words and expressions are in proper sync and so beautifully amalgamated. Your first attempt in Hindi poetry writing shows your expertise and command over the language as well. Really impressive. :)

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    1. Sangeeta Ji, thank you very much for sparing time to read this poem. I welcome you to this space. I feel excited and honored to get the feedback from intellectual like you. This motivates me to write better post next time. Really glad to have your feedback. Means a lot :)

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    2. Thank you so much. 'Twas my pleasure reading your poetry. :)

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  7. Loved every bit of it - the flow in the poetry, the magic of the words, the beautiful message conveyed - everything radiated the light within. Superb for a 'first' - look forward to more, keep writing!!

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  8. Hi Vishal! Really surprised that you've never tried poetry before! You should keep writing... Beautiful!

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    1. Means a lot. Thanks Leena and welcome to my blog. Keep visiting :)

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  9. Lovely one! I like poems in Hindi very much, the essence is much sweeter.

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  10. Can't believe it's your first. Beautiful poem. It's always a pleasure to read hindi verses.

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    1. Thanks Saru for liking this post. Will try to come up different theme next time :)

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    1. Yes... 'First time ever'. Well thank a lot for your this small but very motivating comment. Welcome to my blog. Keep visiting.

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  12. A powerful message through beautiful lines. Loved its rhyming too. Good job, Vishal. (y)

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    1. oh.ho...this is great feedback from a powerful Thinker. Thanks Ravish...this means a lot.

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  13. Loved the ode to sunlight, Vishal!

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  14. Nice attempt.. Simply good..... well written & composed.... Good Job.....!!!!!

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    1. Thanks...Glad that you took time to read it Shakha babu. haha :)

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  15. Vishal ji aap ek Kavigya bhi hai, aaj pata chala. Very well done. Look forward to reading more of your poetry.

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    1. Thanks Ashish. I feel great to have a regular visitor like you who appreciate my work. This only motivates me to come up better post next time. All the best!

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  16. बहुत खूब विशाल सर! क्या अनूठे तरीके से शब्दों को एक साथ पिरोया है. अति सुन्दर!!

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